fightingfate

just one tender moment i cannot find.. well maybe i had none

Tuesday, August 16, 2005

Continuation...

Created this in the treatment room just now...

Darkness sets in...the door closes;
entered both of us, in opposite directions.
I lit up a match, you blew it off;
seeing this, i knew that reconciliation was tough.
Not a window in sight and the air is stale;
deep inside, i never foresaw that we could fail.
I felt cold, the room feels tight;
I think about you, about us every night.
I cannot see in the dark and fear took over;
I felt left out, and pushed all the way to the rear.
Eventually the darkness will leave and the door will open;
hopefully by then, we'll be moving off in the same direction.

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

the entire poem is very nice. i like the 2 nd part that u posted today cos it brought some of my past memories. the flash back was great.. continue to write like this. HAHA,

Tuesday, August 16, 2005 10:14:00 PM  

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